One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing .
Do you think advantageous of this Development outweigh the disadvantageous ?
It is undeniable that advancement in medical implements and treatment have brought many benefits for humanity. While there are a few drawbacks which have appeared with this development, I would argue that these are outweighed by the advantageous.
On the one hand, there are some disadvantages of improvement in medical science which consequently has led mankind to qualified life. The most dominant result is that progressing in medical has caused the rate of mortality has decreased tremendously. Therefore,the population has increased accordingly. In addition, most of the diseases can be diagnosed or cured. Hence, people and the average of old population have increased, although this issue impose serious burden on government for allocating the increasing amount of budget for elderlies whom are not efficient enough for society.
Despite the above argument, the medical science has offered various possibilities for preventing of increasing in population and controlling the mankind crowd. for instance, scientists have invented many tablets or other preventing implements for unwanted pregnancy. Not only, has progressing in medical controlled population, but also with sophisticated devices can detect the cause of many diseases and give the chance to humanity for preventing instead of treating. Thereby the life qualification and expectancy have increased remarkably in recent decades. Beside many remedy possibilities which have been accessible for a great deal of people, this improvement has facilitated the disabled people’s life with innovating artificial parts of bodies which can be similar human body sensitive and incredibly practical and efficient
In conclusion, progressive alterations in health cares are considered to crate various facilities for making human‘s life more graceful and pleasant. I personally believed that the merits of healthcare improvement outweigh the demerits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1647.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90322580645 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20805149647 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.7049830833 49.4020404114 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.692307692 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190254131445 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705912862459 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609126484494 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115412709236 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385195065758 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.94 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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