Some people could be naturally good leaders. Others believe that people can learn leadership skills.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people argue that great leaders are born not made. Others, however, think that leadership skills are built through training, experience and mentoring. In my opinion, leadership skills are the combination of natural abilities and persistent practice.
In fact, people are not born with equal abilities and equal talents, which means that some people can inherit special traits. A good leader is usually natural at certain qualities and characteristics which help them become a latent one, in the same way that excellent singers are blessed with amazing musical gift. For example, good leaders can have more natural abilities of analyzing and resolving problems than others. Therefore, these people always stand out of a group and be able to manage group performance well.
Nevertheless, just only with innate capabilities, a person is not able to be an ideal leader if without in-depth knowledge and experience of his expertise. The leadership skills can be improved through learning process. For instance, at schools, students have many chances to take part in group work activities and lead a small group, which could allow them to develop leadership skills. Furthermore, a great captain also is built on his self-confidence and mastery of his areas of expertise, which only emerge after a great of time and experience. Without these qualities, the leader’s ability can be questioned, as a result, people are unlikely to heed their direction.
In conclusion, while some individuals suppose that leadership requires a set of innate traits such as analyzing and dealing with issues, others argue that leadership skills are formed through years of experience and observation. However, I think that a great leader needs to be talent naturally in their fields and build up knowledge and experience continuously.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38811188811 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8996809381 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562937062937 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0149155055 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.071428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.2857142857 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253744856148 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898626423161 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523705473904 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152330232845 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293371309532 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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