Some folks rather prefer to begin their own business than to work for a company or association. I support the advantages of setting up own business prevail the disadvantages. This essay will support my opinion with relevant examples.
To begin with, one of the major drawbacks of a sole proprietorship is that the owner is truly liable for all debts and incurs all losses. Understandably, the heir must take all losses because there are no others to help him. So if we lose too much money, our business will be terminated, and we will be very vulnerable to be burdened with crippling debts as we lose everything that we invested into the business. In addition, the owner's dream is generally greater than his ability to produce. Therefore, despite limited abilities, many people are found to waste their time establishing businesses, ending in a total failure. Next, for many, a sole proprietor's skills are confined. The narrow expertise can prove an insurmountable obstacle when different types of proficiencies are needed.
Having said that, i strongly believe that choosing to start own business is remarkably constructive owing to the following two reasons. Firstly, the owner receives all profits, which means that all earnings go to the holder. For instance, my uncle John has a successful firm, so he is only the person to reap the success and rewards. Conversely, the uncle would not have received all earnings alone provided that he had worked for other companies, and rather he would have had to share with the team. Furthermore, owning businesses yields a considerable insight in an individual. Again, my uncle would be a good example. Since he has to set everything, and decide what he wants to do with the firm. Hence, taking irreversible decisions has precipitated him to a comprehensive business person. Another advantage of a sole proprietorship is that you pay lower taxes. For example, Mr. Roa, next uncle, has been paying substantially lower taxes, compared to Mr. Alex who is bound to pay a bit higher because of working in a partnership.
In conclusion, considering the advantages such as personal development, substantial revenues and lower imposts, benefits presumably eclipse the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... help him. So if we lose too much money, our business will be terminated, and we ...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15193370166 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06373019725 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624309392265 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.1029853391 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8095238095 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2380952381 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.19047619048 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242149600793 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645179854052 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077393070589 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143336254101 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10338828757 0.056905535591 182% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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I support the advantages of setting up own business prevail the disadvantages.
I support the advantages of setting up own business to prevail the disadvantages.
I support the idea that the advantages of setting up own business prevail the disadvantages.
1. for '... owing to the following two reasons' in the third paragraph, but we see three reasons:
Firstly, the owner receives all profits, which means that all earnings go to the holder.
Furthermore, owning businesses yields a considerable insight in an individual.
Another advantage of a sole proprietorship is that you pay lower taxes.
2. the examples are too long and wordy in the third paragraph, like:
For instance, my uncle John has a successful firm, so he is only the person to reap the success and rewards. Conversely, the uncle would not have received all earnings alone provided that he had worked for other companies, and rather he would have had to share with the team.
3. better to change from:
Having said that, i strongly believe that ...
However, i strongly believe that
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 15
No. of Words: 362 350
No. of Characters: 1806 1500
No. of Different Words: 219 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.362 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.989 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.943 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 99 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 46 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.238 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.184 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.524 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.255 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.429 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.106 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5