Some people like to do only what they already do well Other people prefer to try new things and take risks Which one do you prefer

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...uman nature as they find it interesting.However ,there are some people who love to do o...
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...ture as they find it interesting.However ,there are some people who love to do onl...
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...vities by putting their lives in danger.I prefer the former view. To beg...
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... the former view. To begin with ,those people who used to do same thing a...
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...e more knowledge or experience about it.To be exemplified ,many professionals such...
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...or experience about it.To be exemplified ,many professionals such as doctors, engi...
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...s, engineers and teachers are perfect in their own job ,if they try other profess...
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... teachers are perfect in their own job ,if they try other profession ,they will ...
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...ir own job ,if they try other profession ,they will not become successful. ...
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...ecome successful. Furthermore ,trying new things sometimes put bad infl...
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... of self-esteem to get success. Moreover ,taking risks may prove perilous to ones ...
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...ver ,taking risks may prove perilous to ones life.For instance ,some people find adv...
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...g risks may prove perilous to ones life.For instance ,some people find adventurous ...
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...prove perilous to ones life.For instance ,some people find adventurous sports or g...
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... adventurous sports or games interesting ,but their body or mind is not capable of...
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...ble of doing it due to less body stamina ,still they try it without considering th...
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...considering the consequences. Eventually ,they harm themselves by injuries and wou...
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... To end, a person should try those activities in which he or she is comfort...
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...ities in which he or she is comfortable.If one does something out of his comfort z...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, for instance, sort of, such as, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14218009479 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91749181593 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672985781991 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.2735261461 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 180.833333333 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.1666666667 20.7667163134 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 19.1666666667 7.06120827912 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3729228417 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159411128047 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10784845345 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215434148653 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0942295518278 0.056905535591 166% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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