Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control of our lives, while others think that it has led to many positive developments in all aspects of their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is undeniable that technologies have become an essential part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement as some people find technology beneficial, while others consider everything associated with electronic devices negatively.
A commonly held belief is that all human-beings lives depend on technology. As evidence of this they point to the Internet addiction, when individuals feel enormous stress without using inventions of 21st century. Furthermore, people become more detached from each other being the Internet connected. This paradox could be explained by the fact that virtual reality is absorbing and it is easier to communicate with society through screens. Consequently, people lose their interest to real face-to-face communication. As a result, it leads to stopping people being humans as one of the essential abilities rooted in capacity for interaction now is neglected.
On the other hand, some people claim that technology has evolved our well-being in great extent. For example, they can mention that since robots were invented, less people died during making dangerous jobs, as it became robots` obligation. In addition, the quality and quantity of life have increased significantly. The explanation lies in the fact that technologies made medicine, service, and transport more convenient and accessible for ordinary consumers. Therefore, technology is a reason why now we live in great comfort.
In conclusion, taking everything into account I would argue that technology`s advantages outweigh its drawbacks. And what is more important, we determine benefits of using every single thing ourselves by controlling the way how we do it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ention that since robots were invented, less people died during making dangerous job...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65612648221 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16435686991 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687747035573 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8171162881 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8666666667 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141641680682 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449079555958 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429855866046 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849443490079 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034461012856 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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