some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. others believe those who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they see fit. discuss both these views and give your opinion.
These days along with the modernization is booming in the number of construction in a wide range of form. However, one question arises that while several people hold the belief that newly architectures should be under the supervision of the government, numerous others, including me, support the idea that the investor should have the right to design it in their own way.
On the one hand, there are certain explanations for putting newly constructed buildings in megacities under the control of the authority. One convinced justification is it makes a great contribution to urban planning. It does not seem unreasonable to suggest that institutions in different shape and colour may not in harmony with each other and, thereby creating the feeling of irritation among not only the indigenous people but also the foreign visitors as well. An illustration of this is that huge modern designed skyscrapers should not be allowed to construct in preserved ancient towns which constitute unique features to the country. Therefore, by allowing the government to considered the proper design for the houses, it can be a very first step to a breathtaking large metropolis with uniformity and methodical
Nevertheless, from my perspective, who finance the formation of an architecture should be enabled to decorate them based on their aesthetic standard. First and foremost, since these buildings are considered as private properties, the owners should be the ones making the decision for the appearance of their constructions. Consequently, there are no points to force anyone living or working in their own dwelling without feeling comfortable. Furthermore, it is particularly significant that people with different background and experience have their unique standpoint about the artistic concept. Therefore, controlling the design of the building is synonymous with hindering them from accomplishing their dream accommodation. By the way of exemplifying, several huge fans of the Renaissance architecture reconstructed their house that completely simulates this type of architecture.
In conclusion, the supervision of the authority over the newly constructed building may bring a more proper urban planning, however, since this is the private asset, one should be free to design their own architecture based on their aesthetic mind
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[7]
Message: The word 'anyone' in subjunctive clause must be used with a base form of a verb: 'live'.
Suggestion: live
...ly, there are no points to force anyone living or working in their own dwelling withou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55182072829 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21201930313 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557422969188 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.5870564932 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.461538462 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4615384615 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295983235768 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0986175780484 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700594971135 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192564681301 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0212736879939 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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