Some people think that all lawbreaker should be put into prison, while others believed that there are better alternatives. Discuss both view and give your opinion
Imprisonment has been a widely controversial topic for quite a long time. Whilst there is a huge amount of people supporting the ideas of putting all the lawbreakers into the prison, several others believed in a better alternative. In my opinion, both of these parties have their own right point and it is necessary to combine all the methods for a desirable outcome
On the one hand, there is a variety of explanations for the prison punishment. First and foremost, by serving the prison sentence, offenders are ensured not to cause more harm to society. It is irrefutable that if the criminals are not being locked in the stockade, they could pose an even more serious threat to other citizens. Take slaughters or terrorists for example. In this circumstance, lifetime imprisonment is the most effective way to prevent them from increasing mortalities. Another reason that worth considering is that captivity can act as a deterrent for the potential criminal. The fear of harsh prison condition or being isolated from their family reportedly made numerous offenders, especially the juvenile ones, hesitated before committing a crime as well as prevented several ex-prisoners from backsliding, to mention but a few.
Nevertheless, the opposite sides have their arguments. In the first place, they believed prison failed to act as a hindrance of these lawbreakers. There seem to be shreds of evidence that the criminal frequent breed resentment in jail. Moreover, ex-criminals often found it difficult to reintegration due to discrimination. Consequently, they eventually back to their sinful way of living. To avoid this worrisome tendency, providing educational and vocational training can be a much more efficient method instead of locking offenders in some penitential or reformatory. It can be said that when lawbreakers are fully aware of the danger of breaking the rules, they will obey the legislation system voluntarily
To sum up, while the imprisonment has the beneficial function of protecting the well-being of other dwellers from dangerous criminals as well as made the potential lawbreaker hesitated, the education methods is also vital to solving the problem completely
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Suggestion:
... vital to solving the problem completely
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1850.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36231884058 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14111971441 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.3276703177 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.625 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5625 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205512819119 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531168325347 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796704064224 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12521202071 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700850973831 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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