Some people feel that the design of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by governments. Others think those who spend for the construction should be given freedom to design the building as they wish.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In urban area, every modern designed buildings need to be follow some governments rules and regulation for the well town planning management. However, in some part of designing, they have a sufficient freedom to manage by themselves rather considering government restriction. Where both relevant arguments will be explained in following subsequent paragraphs.
The first and foremost reason to follow rule is the height of building. Which should be taken into account as per region condition. Likewise, on the roadside view, most of government can provide higher number of floors but in residential area it may not be. Owing to surrounding area would be bungalows or tenements. Second, the FSI (Floor Space Index) should be finalized by civil authority. Means every developers require to maintain FSI by giving certain amount of open space in the building, so it cannot look like congested area.
Next, as per town planning management, contractors should leave specific space for widened of road construction in future, ought to be the rate of vehicles will be increased and traffic as well. For instance, in our city, one apartment architecture planned to build 5 floor residential flat without approval of government authority and he designed as per planning. But, whenever he went for permission to civil office, they denied it and then he left the 5th-floor construction.
On the other hand, some individual argued that they should have full of freedom to build new construction as per requirement. As government authority does not provide fully restriction, where they have some freedom as well. Like they can design it in any architectural view that they really want. In addition, they have a permission to use any sort of materials in construction. Including that indoor design would be the choice of owner of the building.
On behalf of my conclusion, citizen needs to follow some basic rules like the height of building and FSI which will always be in favor of proper town planning. Besides that, owner of the bulding has some freedom aspects as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'sufficient freedom'.
Suggestion: sufficient freedom
...r, in some part of designing, they have a sufficient freedom to manage by themselves rather consider...
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Line 1, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...her considering government restriction. Where both relevant arguments will be explain...
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Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maintaining'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: maintaining
...thority. Means every developers require to maintain FSI by giving certain amount of open sp...
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Line 9, column 113, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... space for widened of road construction in future, ought to be the rate of vehicles will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, likewise, look, may, really, second, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, sort of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1743.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8621468457 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8236416928 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7368421053 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6842105263 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30306546104 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913145507496 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582186227811 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169308017169 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516724259636 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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