Some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence in films of television and cinema. Others feel that violent films should be not released. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People hold different opinions about violence in films on television and in movie theaters. while some individuals claim that the level of violence should be controlled by authority. from my perspective, while the level of violence in film should be controlled by the government is of importance, the opinions of some individuals about violent films can be far more important.
On the one hand, there are many myriad disadvantages to the young generation's manners that make it claim to be banned. the most significant of which are the internet and pirated movie websites and the popularity of villain protagonists. With regard to the former, children tend to access pirated movie websites for watching films, which is not suitable for fully immature. As a result, the underage people who watch these violent scenes may create a foundation of brutality among youngsters and school violence. When it comes to the popularity of villain protagonists, adults have immersed themself in character who has rebellious personality that makes them misunderstand antisocial behavior leading to lots of people who have rebelliousness being encouraged to abolish these laws are enforced.
On the other hand, there are many merits of violent films should not be prohibited, linked to a form of entertainment and the profit can achieve resounding in the film industry. In terms of, violent films are a form of entertainment that attention-grabbing viewers find joy in the thrill and excitement of violent films. For example, Viewers can develop the observation skills of how to guess the situation before it is going to happen which makes them feel more and more excited about the details in films. As far as the latter is concerned, film directors can earn lucrative money due to the great demand from people who love violent scenes bringing about the successes of the film industry, so filtering savage elements will be a tantalizing task.
In conclusion, I am inclined to believe that while controlling the level of violent films by authorities can be advantageous, the benefits of violent films should be not released that are more considerable should not be taken into consideration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20512820513 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02992223172 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512820512821 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2107858398 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.538461538 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356157777534 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128770325378 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113128178753 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236791931007 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126337810169 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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