It is true that biotic components especially, animals plays crucial role to maintain balance of ecosystem. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irreuocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that "whether keeping animals in zoo is a bad or highly beneficial for both humans and animals?" Through this essay I shall embark light on both views and shape up my opinion by the end.
In present century, plethora of wild animals like tiger, bear and many more were conserve in man made ecosystem. Still, it is believed by some individuals that it is not a good for animals because every living creature has right to live independent on Earth. Therefore, if animals were free to live in environment, were able to survive accordingly. Polar bear and penguins are the best epitome, as both prefer to live in polar region for better survival so, it is not possible to kept them in natural reserves in an appropriate manner.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who claim that conservative of wild animals in zoo is a suitable methods to conserve endangered species. As we know, due to overpopulation, co-extinction voluminous animals becomes extinct or counted as endangered species. Dodo, balckbuck would be the perfect epitome. In addition to this, reserve parks and wild life centuries are the main source of entertainment for humans. Beside it, researchers were able to get first hand experience as well as permanent knowledge among the diversity of living organisms especially, endangered species.
To crown it all, I pen down saying that by weighing both the options, there is no single conclusion of this problem still, I hold this ground that for an effective clap require both use of hand. Therefore, no doubt, it is right for everyone to live independent in nature but due to extinction of wild animals at a rocket speed it is mandatory to preserve them into special ecosystem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
... animals like tiger, bear and many more were conserve in man made ecosystem. Still, ...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'conserved'.
Suggestion: conserved
...als like tiger, bear and many more were conserve in man made ecosystem. Still, it is bel...
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Line 3, column 511, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an appropriate manner" with adverb for "appropriate"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ssible to kept them in natural reserves in an appropriate manner. Contrary to this, there is an oppos...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'method'?
Suggestion: method
...ve of wild animals in zoo is a suitable methods to conserve endangered species. As we k...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in addition, no doubt, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03384615385 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90088743818 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587692307692 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2016850681 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277104431668 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832652490242 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652585976649 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167485199816 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428737230988 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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