Childcare training course should be mandatory for all parents? Do you agree or disagree explain examples and opinion
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously he has progressed barefooted walking from jungle to take the first step on the moon. They strengthen their view point by claiming that training course; it should be compulsory for all parents or not for childcare? Therefore, the idea has risen that believe it should be while there are both benefits and drawbacks connected with this trend, I strenuously agree that it is an advantageous practice.
On the other hand, there a few disadvantage which are as follows, firstly, in the modern scenario parents were swamped in hectic schedule however, they have complete own responsibility to take care of children. Secondly, mother have already aware to care of child. Especially, mother always love of toddler and show affection towards moppet. The best epitome of this is overseas nation people also higher baby take care in home so, according to my perspective the training course such as nany care should not be mandatory for parents.
On the other hand, there are a plethora of prominent advantages that cannot be ignores. First and perhaps the most important benefit for overall development of child. Because it is essential whereas training skill of childcare is the best way to understood thinking and requirement of child. Secondly, they have good method to concentrate own child nourishment. Last but not least, in the contemporary era, the crime had been surge day-by-day. Training is better and helpful way for parents. How to tackle and secure her child for crimes. The best epitome of this is India has grown up crimes nowaday. I mean to say that kidnapper were kidnapp children so trainer gave knowledge of parents to use electrical digital watch wore on her child wrist for found location of children anywhere.
To conclude, on the basis of the aforementioned explanations, I strongly believe the merits of outweigh the demerits to childcare program is necessity for parents to secure of child for crime and overall nourishment of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, i mean, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12912912913 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85422126182 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582582582583 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7102711592 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.470588235 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5882352941 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230387921436 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654533604317 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798793768043 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140217462833 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468788010786 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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