Some people think that more and more people are becoming dependent on each other and other think that more and more people are becoming independent. Discuss both view and give opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people think that more and more people are becoming dependent on each other and other think that more and more people are becoming independent. Discuss both view and give opinion.

With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irreuocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that whether few people dependent on others or not? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic with illustration and examples and shape up my opinion by the end.

On one side, there is a group of individuals who reckon that most of the people reliant on each other. They strengthen their view point by claiming that, nowadays plethora of business premises are available which are totally depending on the public. A good illustration of this is that in this present scenerio, massive number of people prefer to purchase cosmetic products from shops such as, sun screen lotions, eye makeup products. Therefore, it is the best source of income but, it is only possible if, clients buy things and shopkeepers provides high quality products so, it is clear that both clients and business man dependent on one another.

Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people, who argue that large number of individuals donot depend on each other. To make their view point convincing they claim that, It is true that, earn money requires lots of skills and it is not a 'cup of tea' but individuals especially, students, after completion of their study join high status jobs and earn their livelihood. They donot depend on their parents to live happy and securing life. Europe, America would be the perfect epitome of this which clearly indicate that people residing in such countries earn their own and donot depend on each other.

To make it crown, weighing both the options, I pen down saying that there is no single conclusion still, I take this ground that nodoubt, in this modern era, many people were able to earn due to getting high profile jobs but on other side, some people still, depend upon other especially, the business man

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ye makeup products. Therefore, it is the best source of income but, it is only po...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, for instance, such as, it is true

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1702.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8908045977 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55222243245 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568965517241 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0128648167 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.571428571 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180525085069 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.064361147609 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608858763826 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116985105471 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288400716384 0.056905535591 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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