Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for animals and humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view.
Keeping animals in zoological parks always have their pros and cons. While it can have some benefits for both animals and humans, there are
some people who believe that it is against animal rights. Many arguments are supporting both views, those for and those against to captivation of animals, as I will outline in this essay.
On the one hand, some people including environmental conservationists and scientists believe that keeping animals in conservative situations have a lot of advantages for both humans and animals. Firstly, experts can provide convenient circumstances for endangered and scarce species to stay alive. For example, some Iranian tiger will become extinct soon, but they can be alive and nurtured under the supervision of experts for a long time. Secondly, in zoological parks, people especially children can gain knowledge about various types of animals. Finally, and most important, because of such zoos, people learn to respect nature and take care of it to prevent wild animals from dying out.
On the other hand, some groups think that keeping animals in the zoo
is like keeping them in prison and it is against their rights. In other words, animals should live in their natural habitat and feel freedom. Furthermore, this captivation can have some repercussions for them. For instance, due to the limitation of animals realm in the zoo, they may feel depressed and consequently lose some of their abilities like trapping their prey. I believe that the captivation of animals in anyways is a controversial issue; however, some wild animals are at risk of extinction and too vulnerable, so they need special conservation.
In conclusion, although keeping animals in captivity have some drawbacks on their l life, its benefits for both humans and animals outweigh to these disadvantages. But I believe that it is a government's responsibility to use experts to make a better environment for wild animals to live as their natural habitat.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24842767296 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88974376753 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528301886792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9652472664 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.266666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4666666667 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378512293285 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140854303123 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755014179015 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223379416963 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035587975048 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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