Some people find history a fascinating subject. Others say it is dull and has no place in modern life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Over the recent years, history is a very interesting subject and not only very fantastic experience field but also sometimes makes the people to feel dull and less opportunities to extent a modern life. Admittedly, these bipolar views are either constructive or destructive as contrastingly.
To begin with, some people believes that, history is playing a vital role in our daily life so one it is conspicuously excited. Firstly, in school days one of the subject as social science in which, we are studying about the history of renaissance and ancient empires, moreover, who is honourable at the top. Secondly, civics and geography are closely associated with social studies furthermore, politics are studying more due to this subject. Despite being, we can get the knowledge about parliament election, political leaders history and world history s well. Subsequently, after completion of social studies we are designed as a social worker. Instead of this we can do other related job assignments too. Although we are very talented to solve the hassles and menaces of the society, through this way our notion will be fulfilled. To be specific, one of my colleague she is a staff nurse and also a social worker too in a rehabilitation centres, yet she can do nursing implimentation anmd councilling guidance to the people at a time.
Evidently, the opponents of the social subject is useless and aimless and it has place in a modern life, which meant that the absence of progression and expansion will be less. For a while, it to be destructive and significance are deficient. However, social is not growing more as information technologies, because there is less job opportunities compare to other field and limited resources as well. In addition to that grievance are exceeded this field and found more vigorous culprits and it leads to increase robberies and molestation etc. Consequently, the antisocial environment aroused as directly to the public and the renovated well dedicated life will be stagnant. Thus, it is affected often for modern life.
To mulling up, in my opinion is that social is the largest subject which consists of history, civics and geography necessarily to get a higher position. Hence, we should protect the subject as a conscience.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...gned as a social worker. Instead of this we can do other related job assignments ...
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...ubject is useless and aimless and it has place in a modern life, which meant that...
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...place in a modern life, which meant that the absence of progression and expansion...
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...nt. However, social is not growing more as information technologies, because there...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1900.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13513513514 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00634342741 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7421092063 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.555555556 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174459231392 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052136223201 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450317893892 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110260356842 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423387578804 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.