Some people believe that children should listen to and obey their parents. Others believe that children should think and do things on their own. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Parents are the one, who should get respect from their children and they are the gods among them. However, some people think that children, should listen them, and obey the rules and regulations. Some others says that, they should think and do the works as their own. Contrastingly, both the views are in a constructive side.
Admittedly, children should respect them and give some moral values to them in order to be in a good way and for the blessings. Meanwhile, there are some qualities necessary to follow the children, in which, regulates the character, behavior, attitude and personality at a good scenario. Furthermore, children to successful for their education in a tandem manner, it leads to developed the professional career in a proper way. In fact that, some of the disadvantages also there to facing it. Similarly, they are entirely independent with them and sometimes they are unknown about the progression of advanced technology. Perhaps, they re narrow minded and unsociable in nature, eventhough, cajoled to the ridiculous characters.
Ostensibly, on the other hand, children are doing activities and showing some attitudes as their own without any obedience. Although, they are totally dependent, rather than bold about the studies and environment. Most of the time , they are acting as a berserks and be in chaos mind. However, they are follow the menaces and may not have any notions relating to the further. Despite being, they are exalted but experts about the medias and technologies. Subsequently, they are making the situtions like accidents, violence etc. To be specific, one of my friend she is conspicously changed as a drug addict due to poor parenting, and she started to make her own decisions as she is with.
Having said that, In my opinion, parents should give some freedom of children, but not more and to evaluate everyday their mistakes and give some suggestions for making a good child from the beginning itself. However, children are more responsible for it, and should obey the rules and instructions as much as possible so that they can create a bright future themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 209, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'say'.
Suggestion: say
... the rules and regulations. Some others says that, they should think and do the work...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a tandem manner" with adverb for "tandem"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ldren to successful for their education in a tandem manner, it leads to developed the professional...
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Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ds to developed the professional career in a proper way. In fact that, some of the disadvantage...
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Line 3, column 442, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...l career in a proper way. In fact that, some of the disadvantages also there to facing it. ...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...tudies and environment. Most of the time , they are acting as a berserks and be in...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'followed'.
Suggestion: followed
...and be in chaos mind. However, they are follow the menaces and may not have any notion...
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Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... children, but not more and to evaluate everyday their mistakes and give some suggestion...
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Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le for it, and should obey the rules and instructions as much as possible so that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, similarly, so, while, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1775.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10057471264 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85217035605 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554597701149 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8531236937 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4210526316 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3157894737 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52631578947 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320413343474 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991666177757 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109911735159 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227992381014 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135932502143 0.056905535591 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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