some people focus on news in their country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
The news has huge effects on our life. While national news supplies their citizens with what happens in their country daily basis, the international news will be a good resource for anyone who has multination purposes. From my perspective, we should concern both of them.
The national news will help citizens be aware of their country's situation, especially the rate of crime and the political problems. Without watching the daily news basis, we have no idea about the criminal issues. As a result, we could not take precautions to deal with offenders that are detrimental to society's security. On the political side, each of the countries has built up its regime. Following the national news, we could take a closer look at the modernized tax system, enact the new law, or the in-deep understanding of how the government implements domestic economic policy.
On the other hand, international news is beneficial for anyone who has the intention to expand their business from domestic to foreign trade or want to work in an international organization. The companies which have high prosperity in the domestic market will expand their business overseas. It is a definite way to gain many profits. To make their ambition come true, watching international news every day will help the companies know the environment, the standard of living, or the economic policy. Those are going to help the companies prepare a suitable investment plan. If we want to become international employees, it will be essential to watch the foreign news. Via the news, we can be aware of the international institutions, which means we will have the best preparation.
In conclusion, we should watch both international and national news to be aware of what happens in our nation every day and broaden our horizons about the world.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07382550336 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91337017526 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526845637584 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0094583754 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272832082288 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092261925935 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737034377638 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184803422469 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471275860006 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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