Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Other say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language
Learning a foreign language is very useful in life. Many people argue that learning a foreign language helps people who want to travel or work abroad; meanwhile, others said that learning a new language has numerous benefits. This essay will look through two opinions and give my idea.
Nowadays, learning a new language to work and travel in another country seems to be more popular. The international market more develops than ever before. Employers are looking for skilled workers and need employees who have language skills. As a result, people who can learn a foreign language will be more chances to get a job and promotion in the future; luckily, they can build a career in a foreign country. Traveling is another reason which makes adults want to learn a new language. When they come to a new land, if they know the native language in this area, they can easily communicate with a native speaker to exchange money or trading activities.
However, from my perspective, learning a new language is advantageous than working and traveling abroad. First of all, learning a new language is an opportunity to be exposed to a new culture with more social experience and cultural appreciation. For instance, every year, many student and young people search for the intern, exchange programs, or scholarship to study or research in other countries, which help them to broaden their horizon and have a chance to approach new cultural. These experiences could contribute to greater tolerance because of the exposure to a variety of cultures. Secondly, learning a new language encourage creativity. Studying a second language means we must immerse ourselves in a new culture different from our native ones. It is an excellent opportunity for us to have comparisons and detect an exciting point in each culture. It will boost our ability to think differently, creatively. Finally, following some research has said learning a new language improves memory. We are putting much effort into studying new words and grammar that train the brains, which better our memory.
In conclusion, learning a new language is a challenging process, but more pain more gain. Learning a foreign language not only gives you a chance to working or traveling abroad but also good for your memory, creative thinking, and approach new cultural experiences.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11518324607 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77862040221 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53664921466 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9191104281 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0476190476 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1904761905 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.14285714286 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335800686404 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110569109006 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100116810499 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.247973184971 0.151304729494 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664237407856 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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