Some people say that the only reason for learnings foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country other say that these are not only reason why some one should learn a foreign language discuss both view
In the current period of technology advancement one of of the most pressing concern is regarding the given topic is learning a foreign language is beneficial for travel and to do work in foreign country but other say that other many reason behind the learning of foreign languages .I shall explore the some from various aspects from the following paragraphs
Taking the one side argument ,there is a group of people who believe that should learning of foreign languages only for travel and for purposes in the foreign language .They strengthen there view point by claiming that communication becomes easy with the people of the developed country .Moreover it increases the communication skills .By learning g the foreign language a person can easily achieve the high paid job in the foreign countries such In our country many people taking the IELTS exam to going to abroad for getting the higher education or getting employment .
Contrary to this , there is an opposing group of people who believe that learning g of foreign language is helpful in many field to make their argument convening .They claim that with the learning of foreign languages a person have been improved their cognitive skills and also gain the more knowledge .It is helps person to make him bilinguist . People increased their personal skills by learning the foreign language . By knowing the foreign language a person can easily understand rules , culture and ritual of the developed country
Nevertheless ,weighing both the opinion ,I believe that there is no single conclusion , still ,,I take this ground that an affective clap require both use of hand so it depend either we know a main particular that there are many advantages of learning a foreign language
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, then, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09407665505 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61362593879 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519163763066 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 316.453393093 49.4020404114 641% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 365.5 106.682146367 343% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.75 20.7667163134 346% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.0 7.06120827912 269% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.01903807615 877% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.504988073431 0.244688304435 206% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.292681309116 0.084324248473 347% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147358597841 0.0667982634062 221% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.299096570034 0.151304729494 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118415812073 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.4 13.0946893788 293% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.87 50.2224549098 16% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.43 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.