The chart shows the sports played in Australia in 2003 . All figure in percentage.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'reveals the'.
Suggestion: reveals the
The provided vertical bar graph reveals the reveals the information about the different type of...
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Suggestion: .
...3. It is clear and coherent presentation . The data is calibrated in the per- cent...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...ls played the netball in the year 2003. Moreover only 24% boys were played netball.Furth...
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Suggestion: Furthermore
...eover only 24% boys were played netball.Furthermore 7% boys have been interested to play th...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...eover only 24% boys were played netball.Furthermore 7% boys have been interested to play th...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...to play the tennis and basketball game. Where as the only 23% ,13%, and 20% boys loved t...
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Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...d basketball game. Where as the only 23% ,13%, and 20% boys loved to play soccer ...
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Line 3, column 289, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...nly 23% ,13%, and 20% boys loved to play soccer , swimming, and others. On the...
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...,13%, and 20% boys loved to play soccer , swimming, and others. On the other h...
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Suggestion: ,
...imming, and others. On the other hand ,10% ,3% ,and 10% boys taken the particip...
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Suggestion: ,
...g, and others. On the other hand ,10% ,3% ,and 10% boys taken the participate i...
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Line 5, column 27, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...nd others. On the other hand ,10% ,3% ,and 10% boys taken the participate in to...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...other hand ,10% ,3% ,and 10% boys taken the participate in to the material art, athletics, and...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ipate in to the material art, athletics, and cricket respectively . Furthermore t...
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Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...rt, athletics, and cricket respectively . Furthermore the swimming was only playe...
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
... athletics, and cricket respectively . Furthermore the swimming was only played by the 20%...
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Suggestion: Moreover
...d by the 20% girls during the year 2003.Moreover 60% girls have been used to play Basket...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...d by the 20% girls during the year 2003.Moreover 60% girls have been used to play Basket...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... used to play Basketball and athletics. However soccer, cricket ,and other game were ...
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Line 5, column 281, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...o play Basketball and athletics. However soccer, cricket ,and other game were be...
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Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
... and athletics. However soccer, cricket ,and other game were being using by 5% ,...
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Line 5, column 314, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...However soccer, cricket ,and other game were being using by 5% ,1%, and 12% girl...
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... ,and other game were being using by 5% ,1%, and 12% girls during the year 2003in...
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Line 5, column 393, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...irls during the year 2003in Australia. Moreover only 1% boys were participated in netb...
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...ing the year 2003in Australia. Moreover only 1% boys were participated in netbal...
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...e chosen the soccer game and minimum was chossen netball on the other side maximu...
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...n the other side maximum number of girls are selected the netball however the mi...
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...aximum number of girls are selected the netball however the minimum girls were i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97572815534 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6995484989 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.1084964643 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1818181818 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 1.69756097561 1649% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113811068224 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0452117799215 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516920334834 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665524397214 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563004059205 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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