The chart shows the sports played in australia in 2003. All figures in percentage.
The horizontal depicts that information of representation the sports played in australia in 2003. It is give nine sports in the chart and give proportion.
Moving a quick glance in the illustration, the girls and boys was mostly interested in outdoors games.In addition, the girls was played the netball in 25 proportion and boys are not interested played the netball games.Then it was very reduced the proportion in 1. Afterthat, girls was participated in the swimming and it is went up percentage in 20 and boys was nearly by declined percentage in 13.Hence,the boys are mostly interested games like tennis,cricket, basketball,material arts.Moreover, they was equal proportion in the activities.
On the flip side, the girls are more active the soccer, athletics games.Then, it was rose proportion compared to the boys 23 proprotion.Finally, the boys was boomed percentage in the other games in 20.
To conclusion, the girls was more interested in netball,swimming and athletics.All as all the boys was played games in soccer,cricket and other games.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, moreover, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39759036145 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65074157753 2.65546596893 137% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.5422521696 43.030603864 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.333333333 112.824112599 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6666666667 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11171138788 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964979356364 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106885525436 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107390667075 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124567736974 0.0819641961636 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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