The graph shows the demand for electricity in england during typical days in winter and summer.The graph shows the demand for electricity in england during typical days in winter and summer.The pie charts shows how electricity is used in an average english home.
The linear graph and circular charts reveal that information of representation the requirement for electricity in england.It os give two seasons like winter and summer.
Moving a quick glance on the illustration the first line graph units of electricity hours.Hence, there are 3 and 6 hours fall down and in 9 hours little bit plumed in the chart.Afterthat, in 12 hours use rose in 20,000.But also,in 10 and 24 hour is similar units of electricity in 15,000.
To trigger with, second pie chart electricity is use for first step is rise proportion for the heating rooms and heating water. Dweller was use in winter day.It is upsurge proprotion in the chart is 52.5. Furthermore, washing machines, kettles and ovens are similar use in any seasons.otherwise, there is same percent in tv,radio and food mixer in the chart.
To sum up;in 15 hours is fall up proprotion units of electricity.As well as,heating water are adolescent use in winter season .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... requirement for electricity in england.It os give two seasons like winter and sum...
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Suggestion: Hence
...t line graph units of electricity hours.Hence, there are 3 and 6 hours fall down and ...
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...e 3 and 6 hours fall down and in 9 hours little bit plumed in the chart.Afterthat...
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...3 and 6 hours fall down and in 9 hours little bit plumed in the chart.Afterthat, in 12 ho...
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...9 hours little bit plumed in the chart.Afterthat, in 12 hours use rose in 20,000.But als...
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...terthat, in 12 hours use rose in 20,000.But also,in 10 and 24 hour is similar units...
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... in 12 hours use rose in 20,000.But also,in 10 and 24 hour is similar units of elec...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...se rose in 20,000.But also,in 10 and 24 hour is similar units of electricity in 15,0...
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...ty in 15,000. To trigger with, second pie chart electricity is use for first ...
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...cond pie chart electricity is use for first step is rise proportion for the he...
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...ng water. Dweller was use in winter day.It is upsurge proprotion in the chart is 5...
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...s.otherwise, there is same percent in tv,radio and food mixer in the chart. To sum ...
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...n the chart. To sum up;in 15 hours is fall up proprotion units of electricity....
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...fall up proprotion units of electricity.As well as,heating water are adolescent us...
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...oprotion units of electricity.As well as,heating water are adolescent use in winter seas...
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...ater are adolescent use in winter season .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, second, so, well, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05063291139 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18061202729 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620253164557 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9787060207 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.6 112.824112599 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.4 5.23603664747 294% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238884551003 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131065359306 0.103423049105 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719396433951 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143180244178 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0807590542371 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.