The table below gives information about favorite pastime in different countries in percentage.
The tabular chart shows that 40 to 50 years old people do their favourite pastime activities in different eight Nations. The data is calibrated in percentum.
Overall, it is evident that, the most favourable past time activity is reading in all the Nations whereas, the least favourite is beach.
It can be seen that, 60% people like to watching TV in Canada and 22% individuals are interested in sports activities. Music, beach and sleep are less favourable pastime activities in Canada. Moreover, in France, people interested for doing only four particular activities that is reading, hobbies, music and sleep. In England, people participated in only three activities reading, hobbies and music.
In Addition to this, in Australia, korea, China and USA, people are participated in all activities but, in Australia and Korea, the most favourite past time activities in the individuals are TV, reading and hobbies. In USA, most of the people are interested in watching TV rather than other activities. Noticeable, in Japan, 62% people has participated in only one pass time activity, that is reading.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...it is evident that, the most favourable past time activity is reading in all the Nations ...
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Line 7, column 148, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...Australia and Korea, the most favourite past time activities in the individuals are TV, r...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ndividuals are TV, reading and hobbies. In USA, most of the people are interested...
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Line 7, column 224, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...als are TV, reading and hobbies. In USA, most of the people are interested in wat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27118644068 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8648246277 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54802259887 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.0454215209 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0295782624853 0.215688989381 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0146974436149 0.103423049105 14% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300136502271 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0246542382542 0.15604864568 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325970205269 0.0819641961636 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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