The table below gives information about favorite pastimes in different countries in percentage.

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The table below gives information about favorite pastimes in different countries in percentage.

The given table chart reveals the information about distinct activities are spended by indiviuals from age 30-50 years old in eight different nations. The data is calibrated in per centum. Which is clear representation.

The overall pattern amerging that task type highlights the majority of people like to spend time in the reading, while minority og multitudes matching to sleep in that time.

It can be seen that, about 60% canada, australia and americans mostly living souls like watching television shows. On the other hand this figure is low for china where only 15%. Americans denizn like to music at the top of the all series near about 23%, where as only 2-5 to the other states the same way. A fifth in england the highest percentage to liked sleep, and USA as the lowest only 2% in the case. Furthermore, the like hobbies in chinesse most attrative approximately half. Moreover, to oppsite nation in france only 20%. It is highest percentage in beach-lover is in Australia and USA at 30%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 190, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
.... The data is calibrated in per centum. Which is clear representation. The overall...
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Line 5, column 255, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...e top of the all series near about 23%, where as only 2-5 to the other states the same w...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 536, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the highest'.
Suggestion: is the highest
...o oppsite nation in france only 20%. It is highest percentage in beach-lover is in Austral...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88304093567 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65062632417 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684210526316 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.8555072307 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9090909091 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5454545455 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0803503656687 0.215688989381 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0232139363746 0.103423049105 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499610337705 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587309002361 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628274063094 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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