Some people get into debt by buying things they do not need and cannot afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
The human race has entered a completely new stage in its history. With the increasingly rapid economic globalization and urbanization, more problems are brought to our attention. Against the background of the current, the money and finance are consolidating their status as the foremost and crucial resources at a global scale. Furthermore, becoming indebted amid communality is so controversial plight that people can hardly reach an absolute consensus for a considerable space in time. What factors lead to this phenomenon and what we can do to solve this problem have become a concern to numerous people.
Categorically, the times we are dwelling in is defined as the based principally on money on account of our quotidian matters are connected with currencies. As we know, at the present time, an accelerating number of individuals are confronting with severe difficulties relating to how to invest money on ground that more people are not enlightened and informed about capital spending adequately. Once nifty discoveries be created, there arised the role of emulation among the members of society.
By and large, an escalating number of individuals are attempting to imitate one further and commenced to compare themselves to others, after a myriad number of affluent households purchased cutting edge and innovative machines. In practice, humans from underprivileged families go further into debt by perpetrating the actions of prosperous people as well as the fierce competition will occurred between them. Moreover, the actions of opulent people encourage and give incentive to less affluent households to purchase materials that they have not capability to compensate. In particular, this polemic situation could be ameliorated whether the authoritarian regime endeavor to supply the members of communal with sufficient knowledge in terms of economy.
In final analysis, I accentuate that although the issue of becoming indebted is increasing in general curiosity at an alarming rate and might seen insurmountable, it might be mitigated and palliated in the foreseeable future by adequate action from both public and authority.
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Suggestion: occur
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Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'have seen' or 'see'?
Suggestion: have seen; see
...curiosity at an alarming rate and might seen insurmountable, it might be mitigated a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, in general, in particular, as well as, by and large
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53353658537 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18340426052 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637195121951 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4693979019 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.615384615 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2307692308 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219217218805 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645312345277 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795415229148 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108829262112 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693967749261 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.7 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 78.4519038076 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.