Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?
consumerism lifestyle grows among the people. they purchase unnecessary and overpriced unessential goods using a loan from banks. this essay will address reasons causing this issue and propose solutions that the government ought to take to prevent consumptive habit in the community.
Plenty of reasons explain why people in today’s world become more materialistic. First of all, people purchase unnecessary luxurious goods as they follow a certain lifestyle. For example, people buy brand-new gadgets because of their social circles. Thus, they will not feel left behind in the current trend. secondly, banks provide more convenient transaction tools such as credit cards with low interest or even interest-free. this encourages cardholders to get unaffordable items as they could pay an instalment for a certain period.
There are suitable remedies which can be done to deter the public from this way of life. Firstly, the government should educate the people regarding gravest problems led by consumptive lifestyle. For example, the government have to install the billboards near department stores to convey massages to stop purchasing highly priced unessential items. As a result, this can increase public awareness. secondly, the government should issue strict policy regarding credit card application requirements. Those who come from low economic class should be restricted to apply for this payment method as it can allow them to have the bank loans.
To sum up, I believe that consumerism practices in the community re caused by the way people live and easy access to economic assistance, and to solve this issue, the government should continuously remind the community regarding the bad consequences of this lifestyle as well as proposing a better regulation on credit card ownership.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, by the way, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5523465704 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92580068721 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628158844765 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 65.6284225298 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.1875 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281972921106 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831951184225 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560475106528 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150450129868 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500226078453 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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