The graph and table below show the changes in the number of overseas visitors and top 5 visitor countries to Britain in 2004 and 2005.
The information about the number of international visitors coming to the United Kingdom from 2004 to 2005 and the top 5 of the overseas tourist origin nations are illustrated by the graphs.
Overall, it clear that the number of overseas visitors in the uk was higher in 2004 and it hit the peaks at the end of the year. In the meantime, there was no substantial change on the top 5 list of the tourists' origin countries, except for india entered the list in 2005.
The number of overseas tourists travelling to the UK in 2004 saw a fluctuation. It commenced at around 600 thousand in January, falling by 200 thousand in March and rising to about 640 thousand in June. After this, there was a slight change on the figure in september and the international visitor number reached a season peak in December (more than 800 thousand). In the first six months of 2005, there was a stable trend in the quantity of international visitors to Britain at around 600 and the figure went down by half in september before finishing the period just below 800.
In the meantime, the top 3 list of Britain’s visitor countries unchanged, except for Japan dropping to second-place in 2005. India and South Korea were experienced a positive change, the former increased by 15% and the latter was 7%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, so, as to, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74336283186 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74784104946 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513274336283 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8266168091 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.111111111 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1111111111 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346521983493 0.215688989381 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140356906686 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0905251129459 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215402298384 0.15604864568 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345056162642 0.0819641961636 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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