The graph and table below show the changes in the number of overseas visitors and top 5 visitor countries to Britain in 2004 and 2005.

Essay topics:

The graph and table below show the changes in the number of overseas visitors and top 5 visitor countries to Britain in 2004 and 2005.

The bar chart illustrates the change figure of the tourists coming to the uk in 2014 and 2015, while the table provides information about the top five visitor nations to The uk’s tourism.

Overall, it is evident that the number of tourists visiting the uk in the meantime experienced a fluctuation. Japan, Australia and The United States were among the top three of the uk’s visitor origin.

In january 2004, around 600.000 of tourists travelled to Britain and the number decreased by 200.000 in March. Following this, the figure increased to more than 700.000 in June, reaching a peak at approximately 800.000 in December. The Britain’s tourist number from January to March 2005 saw a slight difference. The former accounted for about 600.000, while the latter was lower by 50.000 that of January. In june, the figure increased moderately, levelled off in September, before it jumped to about 800.000 in December.

Most tourists travelling to the UK in 2004 held the Japan, Australia and America citizenship. The list changed in 2005 by Japan dropping to second-place with the change number -3%, while both Australia and America ware +2% each. In 2005, the new country entering the top five list was India with an extra number of visitor 17%.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1069.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13942307692 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71365165883 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3767452225 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1818181818 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236691765439 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894820018161 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754367810681 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14601870923 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060807489306 0.0819641961636 74% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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