The graphs below show information about electronic games in South Korea in 2003.

Essay topics:

The graphs below show information about electronic games in South Korea in 2003.

The pie charts provided illustrate information about the proportion of video games in South Korea in 2003.

Overall, it is clear that many of gamers was young people with the male gender dominating. Also, the most purchasing games was action games.

At the first graph, 45% of the game players were aged 18-35 years old, while lower by 7% was the age group below 18 years old and just over a fifth of them was above 35-year-old group. Besides, the gender of gamers comprised of a majority of men and just above a-fourth was women.

Moving to the best selling type of games, the biggest proportion was combating games, followed by sports and racing at the second and third place. The former accounted for about a-fifth, while the latter was 17%. Both education and role-play were at similar figures (7% each). Also, just a minority of gamers played other modes of electronic-games.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, second, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 742.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88157894737 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48081279684 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657894736842 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.36557882 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4444444444 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172923389111 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700370465641 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113849420713 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131371159777 0.15604864568 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.144325773897 0.0819641961636 176% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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