The circular chart reveals the four main courses of land degradation and the tobular chart illustrates the different regions during the year of 1990. It shows the percentum.
The main factors responsible for the decreased productivity of agricultural land in north america, europe, and oceania during the 1990s were summarized in a pie chart and a table.
the most serious problem was over-grazing. it has caused the world to lose 35% of agriculture land. This problem is followed closely by deforestation and over-cultivation.
The area that has lost most proportion of its agriculture land was europe at 23% However, Oceania and north america was not as badly affected, losing 13% and 5% of its farmland respectively.
Surprisingly, the main problem faced by each area is different from one another. The problem with over-grazing is especially serious in Oceania, resulting in 11.3% of its land unsuitable for agriculture. On the other hand, deforestation that caused 9.8% of agriculture land unusable was the major problem faced by the European farmers. Although over-cultivation was the primary threat in north america, it was not a problem at all in oceania.
In conclusion, over-grazing was the main cause of worldwide degradation in 1990s. europe’s percentage of degradation was largest of all three regions and all three regions had different predominant causes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...mmarized in a pie chart and a table. the most serious problem was over-grazing. ...
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... most serious problem was over-grazing. it has caused the world to lose 35% of agr...
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Suggestion: in the 1990s
...the main cause of worldwide degradation in 1990s. europe's percentage of degradatio...
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...ause of worldwide degradation in 1990s. europe's percentage of degradation was largest...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45212765957 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34033659592 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563829787234 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5627802285 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1818181818 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.13902439024 702% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122384346766 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502513606571 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469224461384 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0765590071921 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539981218893 0.0819641961636 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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