Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford.What are the reasons for this behaviour?What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Essay topics:

Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford.

What are the reasons for this behaviour?

What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Most of the people who have credit cards are the ones who are usually get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. The reasons for this behaviour are they tend to be impulsive and they want to get into trend like what most people have. To prevent people from having this problem is to stop using credit cards.

There are people who loves to go shopping has tendency to get impulsive. When she sees something that caught her interest eventhough she does'nt need it or can't afford she will still buy it using credit cards. For instance a lady who likes to collect shoes when she goes on a window shopping and get across on a shoes that she seen for the first time and find it lovely and beautiful her tendency is to buy it without thingking the price. Another reason could be is when a person likes to come along with fashion trending. There are some who will buy things for the sake of being updated on the current fashion trend even if it will cost too much it won't matter. For example, a guy who loves basketball and the new release of lebron James rubber shoes is out on the market, he will then buy it at all cost using credit cards not knowing that he will soon have a hard time paying it because the price is far higher than his earning from his job.

To prevent people from having this problem is to stop using credit cards. For all we know using credit cards is like borrowing money from the bank with an interest if you fail to pay it on the right time thus will make it harder for someone to settle the amount he borrowed. So if there is no credit card available a person won't have a chance to buy things which he or she cannot afford.

In conclusion, people should be wise enough how to spend their money, they must know their priorities over luxuries in life. On the other hand even if the person has the capability to buy things he or she wanted, right spending must always be taken in consideration.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 71, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...edit cards are the ones who are usually get into debt by buying things they dont ne...
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Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...lly get into debt by buying things they dont need and cant afford. The reasons for t...
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Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ebt by buying things they dont need and cant afford. The reasons for this behaviour ...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...that caught her interest eventhough she doesnt need it or cant afford she will still b...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...terest eventhough she doesnt need it or cant afford she will still buy it using cred...
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Line 3, column 310, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a shoe' or simply 'shoes'?
Suggestion: a shoe; shoes
... on a window shopping and get across on a shoes that she seen for the first time and fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, then, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29781420765 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05344728792 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491803278689 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.4313615416 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.357142857 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309349718753 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130975423593 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10409496743 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217240684474 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147231600183 0.056905535591 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.96 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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