Some people with good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad to work.
Why do you think that is?
What problems does this cause?
in the increasing trend of developments in every field it become a major betterment that born in many countries. Hence, it is necessary to have better health and wealth also.So, few of people say that if a person is well educated he should be in the race of advancements for them, he must a acceptable country which would be suitable for him. In this essay i will discuss my viewpoints and why i think it is being occur with many countries why their people do not want to live there.
There are an abundance of reasons to justify my stance. The first and For most is that the many developed countries are speaking english and it becomes an international language of the world.Therefore, there are many educated masses who can speak english with an ease, for them it is becomes more easier to get migrate to many developed countries. Moreover, there are many causes that would make to a people to go in another country such as worse transport facilities, unhygienic food and other living expenses in their host country. consequently, When a people see better life than he is in living then he want to catch all the well furnished amenities for them.
Yet another reason to substantiate my viewpoints regarding this, in plethora of countries have optimum economy rate and a precise weig that they are giving to their employees. it would make superior impression on many countries that are down the line of poverty. for that, people are attaining education much as they acquire then they would get migrate to another countries because it is life altering for them. Eventually, people have listen news that is illustrative regard the developments in many countries for that people intend to get migrate in wealthy nations.
To conclude, there are some immigrations requirements those cannot be fulfill uneducated masses. Apart from it, well educated are migrating themselves in fast pace to be stay away from many hurdles those are they facing in the host nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90447761194 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75493441341 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528358208955 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.5226574135 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.384615385 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129333874266 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503162613058 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567818259907 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08247847431 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453847915896 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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