Some people have benefited from modern technology, but some have not benefited from it at all. To what extent do you agree?
The advent and development of science and technology have changed our World in many respects. However, some people claim that leading-edge technology is not completely beneficial as thought. In my opinion, I partly agree with this argument.
On the one hand, many modern devices seem to cause confusion to the elderly and to be hardly affordable for the poor. For old people, due to the effects of ageing which result in weakening the functions of many organs such as eyes and brain, it is particularly difficult for them to utilise those gadgets effectively. In other words, as many electronic companies try to make their products as minimal in details and exquisite in designs as possible, the elderly may find them perplexing and time-consuming to learn using those items. For poor people, while they have other struggles in life like poverty or illiteracy, purchasing new technology every time it is updated is unbelievable. For instance, only the richest person in the mountainous villages in Northwest Vietnam can afford a mobile phone which is beyond the reach of the common in those places.
On the other hand, I would also argue that recent scientific applications play a vital role in the advancement of our society. Thanks to the dramatic progress in surgery equipment, nowadays thousands of lives have been saved every year from many illnesses once considered incurable such as tumours, heart disease. Without those sophisticated techniques, mankind would have never been successful in combating those deadly diseases and increasing our life expectancy. Another positive impact of machines and computers worth mentioning is the fast, far-flung communication. Centuries ago, talking to somebody in a far distance was a far-fetched story. Nevertheless, handheld tech now ensures convenience and open-access communication which allow everybody to connect, correspond and collaborate on a global scale.
In conclusion, while I admit that not everyone in our community profits from cutting-edge technology, I believe that it is still instrumental in many aspects of our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 515, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to use'.
Suggestion: to use
... perplexing and time-consuming to learn using those items. For poor people, while the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1760.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38226299694 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04286109409 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639143730887 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2377431206 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109637250283 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330908688071 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358931617979 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719021789076 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363285336549 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.