Tourism is an ever growing business.
What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?
It is true that tourism has brought a radical change in many respects. Among those, a boost in the local economy and more job opportunities are the most prominent advantages that profit both the locals and society.
For the community, tourism revenues are the direct benefit that comes twofold. Firstly, tourists pour cash directly into local products which range from food to clothing, souvenirs and amusements. This type of direct profit has helped many communities to develop their economy, where other sectors such as industry or agriculture may not be possible. For instance, Phu Quoc island has many large sand dunes which hinder agricultural development. However, owing to beautiful long coasts and coral reefs, it attracts millions of travellers every year, which, in turns, improves the society radically. Secondly, the additional incomes earned from tourists also benefits the local governments. The more money they receive from taxes and public services, the more funds are allowed launching public projects such as roads, parks, airports. Those both draw more attention from tourists as well as enhance lives in the area.
For the inhabitants, the easiest merit of tourism to identify is the jobs it brings. This ranges from directly influenced positions such as tour guide, hotel staff to indirect ones such as employees working in retail and food production. In other words, once the local economy is expanded, it is beneficial for many sectors, which therefore increases the rate of employment. Another opportunity given by the booming tourism industry is more chances for entrepreneurs to establish their own services, products or facilities. For example, knowing that many foreigners want to buy traditional handicrafts of Vietnam, a company named Tiki create an online platform to sell works of fine craftsmen so that travellers can find their favourite souvenirs easily.
In conclusion, a fantastic source of incomes to local economies and employment possibilities for the residents are the most noticeable gains from tourism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 880, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... both draw more attention from tourists as well as enhance lives in the area. For the inh...
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Line 3, column 635, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Tiki) must be used with a third-person verb: 'creates'.
Suggestion: creates
...crafts of Vietnam, a company named Tiki create an online platform to sell works of fin...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42319749216 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76953526188 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623824451411 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6289901887 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.125 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9375 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0917511037442 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373526818464 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474532085229 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.062295009262 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00670730824631 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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