Travel industry has a major boom in the later part of the 20 century. Undoubtedly Tourisam will provide lot of benefits to the developing countries in terms of financial uplifting. this essay will discus the advantages of travel industry to both individuals as well as society.
To begin with, Tourisam is a continuous progressive sector which leads to employment to the many.mainly It help to develop hotel tourguides and other jobs. For instance with the increasing of thise industry, touristy hostel recently high trend those generate employment to the lot people. As well as hotels restaurants and some of the local beneficial a high volume.
Another benefits are it will to develop the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 584.0 1615.20841683 36% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 113.0 315.596192385 36% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16814159292 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.2603904387 4.20363070211 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87178709052 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 176.041082164 42% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654867256637 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 184.5 506.74238477 36% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4097990847 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4285714286 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1428571429 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0521027484667 0.244688304435 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258043362959 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246834088013 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0437594743502 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0204952781749 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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