Tourism is an ever growing industry.
What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society?
Today, the tourism industry are on the rise. People around the globe tend to go once or more annually vacating and discovering new recreation places. This brought to many cities wealth and prosperity that enhanced and boosted their economy to a great extent.
It is indisputable that cities with unique amenities are different, in several aspects, from regular cities and these felicities are the result of the touristic stigma that made it's uniqueness. Firstly, the inflow of people into a certain city for recreation purposes enhanced the economy to a great extent. Restaurants, hotels and resorts are competing for tourists satisfaction and create offers as well as events to allure as much tourists as they can. This creates enormous job opportunities for locals and generally boosted the average family income of the city dwellers. Moreover, tourism boom the traditional products industry as travelers adore purchasing and collecting souvenirs.
In addition, the benefits are not confined to merely economical aspect, though tourism vastly alters people social behaviorism. It is explicit that a citizen from a touristic city is ideologically different from a citizen from a regular city. The touristic city dwellers have the tendency to be more friendly and more sociable than others. Another merit to be mentioned that many surveys showed that significant number of people living in touristic cities are multilingual. This is considered as an additional cultural felicity to the city.
To conclude, tourism truly brings about luxury and prosperity to the city in a myriads of aspects other than economy and such cities considered a portray and a gain to the whole nation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...recreation places. This brought to many cities wealth and prosperity that enhanced and...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e offers as well as events to allure as much tourists as they can. This creates enor...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...normous job opportunities for locals and generally boosted the average family inc...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a myriad' or simply 'myriads'?
Suggestion: a myriad; myriads
...ut luxury and prosperity to the city in a myriads of aspects other than economy and such ...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...than economy and such cities considered a portray and a gain to the whole nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, so, well, in addition, as well as, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34586466165 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82439683469 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567669172932 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0773246573 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0801723147667 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348132910992 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504828188122 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572370429022 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225581371536 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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