Nowadays, tourism plays an important role for developing countries. It represents a source of income and support local economies of those countries. This essay will illustrate the advantages that can be obtained of growing such an industry. It will also elicit how local communities can be benefited of such a growth based on jobs opportunities and cultural exchange.
Undoubtedly, tourism is one of the main methods that it has widely been utilised by many nations for economic purposes. The growth of tourism industry can be a substitute for some countries who suffer from a scarcity in their natural and industrial resources. Recently, it is observable that governments invest a tremendous amount of money to provide great facilities and amenities in order to attract tourists worldwide. For example, it has been reported that thousands of people visit Paris annually or even monthly. Consequently, such a massive number of tourists would open doors for creating enormous jobs for individuals and that would be directly beneficial for local communities.
In addition, tourism sectors can be advantageous for societies based on another extends such as cultural exchange and diversity. People attend from different nations, backgrounds and ethnic groups. Such gathering can be a platform for persons to meet and mix with each other. Moreover, people share their values and customs in respectable manner. In fact, such growing can make cities to become cosmopolitan. As a result, it can bring international investors to those countries. Hence, both local communities and individual would benefit significantly.
To conclude, tourism industry can make an indispensable role for developing and prosperity of counties. In particular, it provides vigorous economic and cultural exchange for local societies and people.
Advancement and…
Advancement and sophistication in technology has moulded the world into one big family,encouraging people to travel around the globe. This enhances tourism across the world and has made this sector one of the most evergreen fields. In my essay, I will explain how has it supported individuals and society of the receipient countries.
Growth in technology has enabled people to travel and explore the places nearby and far. This has created ample opportunities for individuals of the host country to employ themselves and uplift their standards of living. Individuals ensure, that they maintain an extremely hygenic environment to welcome tourists. People also learn new languages to communicate with travelers. Also, they develop their cooking and baking skills to make sure tourists feel home.
Tourism, simultaneously develops hotel and education industry assisting society. Recent survey by "The Times", found that crime rate is negligible in a place which is a tourists destination. This is because citizens can have a good life style with clean surrounding to live with. Evidently,reducing the crime rate and lesseing the burden of government. Furtheremore,availability of transport to cushion tourism also eases local's routine life. Nevertheless, tourism enhances cultural amalgamation which in turn is a positive for society.
To conclude, I opine that travelling for leisure can not only benefit individuals or society but also government by receiving foreign income which can be utilised for creating opportunities for its citizens. It also helps in reducing unemployment and poverty, which can result in overall development of the country.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, in fact, in particular, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56115107914 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05901784677 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4448249597 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4444444444 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38888888889 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155821290816 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520658882254 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048810510586 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107813298379 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271645322775 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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