Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Today, there has been burgeoning in crime rates around the globe. Some people argue that capital punishment is imperative to deter offenders. However, other people assert that death penalty is not the only solution. I believe that there are alternative methods of fighting crimes that can obviate the need to verdict a capital punishment from the first place.
On one hand, some people think that in the absence of death penalty world would be a dangerous place to live. It is considered a deterrent for criminals that may make them think twice before committing a crime. In addition, by executing the savage criminals, government guarantee the society their safety and not dealing with such criminal again. Take serial killers for example, as such psychotic and disturbed individuals , a lifetime sentence will not be enough to rehabilitate them and probabilities of escaping prison is always present.
On the other hand, other people think that crime preventive measures should be established to obviate the need to capital punishment . Firstly, educating all society members produce oriented individuals with goals to achieve will axiomatically decrease the crime rates. Secondly, involve all society members in community serving festivals, such as planting flowers on the main roads may make individuals feel their importance and belonging to the society. Take Japan for example, as they make pupils to clean their own classrooms as a group. The mass events grow positive feelings regarding society in individuals which may prohibit future crimes.
To conclude, the death penalty may seem the only solution in major and deliberately convicted crimes, but the government should contrive a preventive measures to such crimes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43333333333 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75814449423 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5769613934 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.785714286 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141615950086 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514405631129 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046501653122 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884073446485 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566765112767 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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