Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads on to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
Today, there has been debated that people generally inclined toward mother role in upbringing minors than fathers one. I personally believe that both parents have an imperative and fundamental parts in raising children. However, the mother often have the major part of this intricate duty.
On one hand, people argue that father role in raising minors is indispensable. While it is one hundred percent true, though fathers free time is usually limited. They work on workdays to ensure a convenient living standards for their families. Besides, in the weekends, fathers time wasted in house maintenance. Hence, a little or no spare time left to be spent with their minors. However, mother are usually present for her children in every single step. Therefore, manners and behavior of children are observed closely by mothers who guides them to correct the wrong behavior, for this, she is majorly responsible for her children discipline. From that perspective, motherhood is accentuated more than fatherhood.
On the other hand, the idea of shared parenthood must be implemented. Hence both roles are equally important. The notion of woman role is confined to rear children should be redressed. Women are different in modern era, they now participate majorly in the working community and this abolished the idea of restraining the entire child rearing role on mother. In order to produce emotionally and mentally salubrious offsprings, fathers should always involve in their children upbringing, because there are activities that are best suited to be done by a father figure, such as bringing the child to a sport event.
To conclude, currently, family dynamics has been altered to a great extent and this imposes the fact that decision of expanding family by having more children should be subordinated to a joint decision of both parents. As the result of such decisive will be under shared responsibility.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'standard'?
Suggestion: standard
... workdays to ensure a convenient living standards for their families. Besides, in the wee...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... shared parenthood must be implemented. Hence both roles are equally important. The n...
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed to a joint decision of both parents. As the result of such decisive will be und...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, so, therefore, while, such as, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26470588235 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77444051739 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604575163399 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.8927933716 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199838806464 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537715329618 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455322448967 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101495878229 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497563561439 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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