Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and
avoiding change. Other people believe that change is a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Every person has a different attitude towards change. While some people prefer to live
their lives with as little disturbance as possible, others crave change and new
experiences. In my opinion, a balance of new and familiar situations is the ideal.
Many people prefer to conduct their lives in a way that avoids change. These types of people may choose to live in the same city their entire lives, choose one job or career path and follow it until they retire. For example, I have a neighbour that has lived
in the same house since his childhood, became an art teacher, and stayed in that job for the entirety of his working life; his career choice was conducive to his preference to avoid change. This type of lifestyle is comforting to many people as they know what to expect
each day; there are few unknowns and the maps of their lives are predictable and reliable.
Other people, however, thrive on change. These people may move to different cities and countries to experience new cultures, living environments and job opportunities. They may find a life without change unexciting and stifling. And many
jobs cater to the desire to experience new settings. Journalists, travel writers and pilots are some career paths that might be chosen by those who enjoy change. Too much
change, however, can be unsettling.
My opinion: In my opinion, a balance of change and reliability is the best way to live. Much comfort can be derived from having a home that is familiar and where friends and
family can provide support. Occasional travel and change, however, provides new experience that can be refreshing, educational and enjoyable.
In conclusion, I believe that some stability is important for a grounded lifestyle, but I also believe that some change makes for a more interesting life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...as a different attitude towards change. While some people prefer to live their live...
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Suggestion: Experiences
...possible, others crave change and new experiences. In my opinion, a balance of new and fa...
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Suggestion: In
...le, I have a neighbour that has lived in the same house since his childhood, bec...
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Suggestion: Each
...ny people as they know what to expect each day; there are few unknowns and the map...
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Suggestion: Jobs
...nge unexciting and stifling. And many jobs cater to the desire to experience new s...
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Suggestion: Change
...n by those who enjoy change. Too much change, however, can be unsettling. My opini...
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Suggestion: Family
...hat is familiar and where friends and family can provide support. Occasional travel ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03300330033 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66168292258 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557755775578 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.8965298169 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7058823529 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8235294118 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272042624427 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087149484513 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729076174003 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100838919756 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652990290728 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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