Some people regard work as the most important thing in life and have little interest in anything else. Other people are more enthusiastic about their hobbies and leisure interests than their jobs.
Discuss both these attitudes and give your own opinion.
How much work is enough for living? Where is the fine-line between our career and our personal interests? In my opinion, both are essential and this balance could easily lead our life to the successful one. This essay will discuss both views.
In regards to occupation, there is a group of people who really honor their jobs. in my idea working is one of the most significant part of our lives which we attempt to reach. In additon, it somehow builds our social character, which makes our life framework. Besides, there is a general thinking which said: life is like a game you can upgrade it to the next level by earning money; However, working more than normal could have seriously effect on your personal life and it is the direct cause of physical and mental health.
In contrast, recreation is an indispensable part of our lives. Moreover, from the literature full time working put so much stress into us, which could be negated by some leisure activities such as: camping, fishing, gathering with friends and etc. So, there are second group of folks who are more interested in having fun and their quotation is “seize the moment”, which psychologically could devastate their later life due to the fact that there is no saving.
In conclusion, there is a steady line between our career and our hobbies and it really depends on our personality to chose which of them. But obviously, If we could keep the balance we would have a victorious life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: Regarding; With regard to
...e. This essay will discuss both views. In regards to occupation, there is a group of people ...
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Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
... of people who really honor their jobs. in my idea working is one of the most sign...
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Line 2, column 440, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'effected'.
Suggestion: effected
...g more than normal could have seriously effect on your personal life and it is the dir...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ur lives. Moreover, from the literature full time working put so much stress into us, whi...
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Line 3, column 239, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...amping, fishing, gathering with friends and etc. So, there are second group of folks who...
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Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
...h friends and etc. So, there are second group of folks who are more interested in hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, really, second, so, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1211.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78656126482 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59735828406 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5442024704 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1538461538 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20015095045 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678157213597 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539002924756 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11456442544 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459809057948 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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