Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is said that advertising could appeal to people to be conscious of a product and then consume it whereas others think advertising is so common that they often simply ignore it. I will discuss these views in the essay and show my opinion as well.
On the one hand, there is no doubt that advertisements could exert profound influences on human impressions about a particular brand. Therefore, most companies associate success of a new production with an intelligent advertising strategy, which is the reason why they cannot afford to not invest plenty of money for outstanding advertisements. As a result, there are a huge number of advertisements coming across when people surf the Internet or go for a walk on any road. I think people could focus on those things, then believe in the quality of items and finally decide to buy something which is not necessary to them.
On the other hand, in today’s era, advertising is ubiquitous that people got numb with their appearance. I opine that they just simply skip advertisement if they see it on accident when they browse the net, search for news or watch movies on TV. Moreover, people acquired enough information and awareness that they do not completely trust in advertising. After all, they just pay attention to what they need and consume products that meet their demands.
In short, advertising can lead to an increase in the rate of revenue but nowadays, people utilize items based on its’ intrinsic quality without believing in companies’ advertising.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: YOURS_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: 'its'?
Suggestion: its
...nowadays, people utilize items based on its’ intrinsic quality without believing in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, after all, i think, in short, no doubt, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99606299213 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88119317342 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0121882257 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.363636364 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0909090909 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249624203503 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940751042335 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470295407962 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152566055279 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641452748031 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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