Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that advertisement has improved their strategy into convincing custommers into buying the product. While others are sanitized towards companies marketing schemes that they have automatically ignored all the advertisement, I would argue that marketing today have trick most people into consumming product.
On the one hand, people have been ignoring companies advertisement since they have been exposed by a lot of them on a daily basis. With the introduction of the internet, many companies have shifted their marketing schemes to digital platform. As a result, consummers are being bombarded with corperation advertisement causing them to ignore every advertisements they came across. For instance, Facebook, a famous social media platform, are being littered with ads in consummers news feed which they can not disable.
On the other hand, I think advertisement today has persuaded many people into consumming products. The main factor contributed to this has been the use of psychology in marketing campaign. In which, advertisers trick consummers by introducing products that could solve a particular problem they might come across currently so that custommers could purchase the item without checking if it is quality enough for the job. Thus, leading custommers to purchase items they might not need or broken. For example, Apples, a prominent company that produce technology product, has been notorious for tricking custommers about the new feature that their Iphone have for many years by using tech savvy words and purposefully leaving out all the flaws that the product might have.
In conclusion, marketing nowadays are more prevalent than ever before with the introduction of the internet. While some say that they have been calloused towards these schemes but I would argue that they have successful in deceiving consummers buying their products.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1587.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49134948097 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8792711689 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570934256055 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9941344434 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.076923077 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.84615384615 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120741589361 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523953113248 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633182726844 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802856834423 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00315488333647 0.056905535591 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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