Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is opined that advertisements are easily attracting people's attention and make them purchase their products, however, some individuals think that promotion is becoming too popular that people no longer show their interests in it. Personally, I am in favor of the latter view.
On the one hand, there is one major reason why people believe that advertising is really good at making us to buy things. Since nowadays, the main concern of most brands is how to increase their profits and make their products gain momentum. Hence, many brands have a tendency to use the image of celebrities to promote their products as this trend helps to build trust among customers due to the influence of celebrities. The celebrity can post a status on social platforms such as Facebook or Instagram to endorse the products of brands they collaborate with. After a few hours of posting, depending on different levels of influence and fame of each celebrity, the number of products consumed and purchased will fluctuate differently. To illustrate, Lisa of Blackpink is brand ambassador of Celine, thus, because of her large influence on the global, whenever she wears clothes of Celine and post them on her Instagram with millions of followers , it makes people want to buy it and the purchase and consumption of the products will increase dramatically.
On the other hand, I am subscribe to the view that some advertisings are becoming too ubiquitous that they no longer draw people's attention. As not all brands can afford to make celebrities endorsement to persuade people to buy things, therefore, those brands start making advertisements which are not ethical to bring people around to purchase their products. For instance, in the social networking sites nowadays, there has been an appearance of advertisements of medicines, which they introduce that these medicines can cure cancer, diabetes but these advertisements have no evidence to prove the medicine is effective. Therefore, people start losing their interests with those advertisenment and having a prosperity to use the products directly to decide whether or not they should purchase it.
In conclusion, it is true to some extend that some advertisements are successful at bringing people around to buy things due to the use of celebrities's images, however, I am of the opinion that because of the appearance of unethical advertisements, people start losing their interests in those promotions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2059.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22588832487 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00079143542 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515228426396 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5584338316 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.384615385 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3076923077 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259306314577 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962422195997 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0916881037394 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188940562704 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695087587944 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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