Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In light of technological advancement, advertisements appear with increasing frequency, which some believe sway customers to purchase items. While others think that the omnipresence of advertising prevents people from taking notice of it, I am of the opinion that advertisements play an integral role in our shopping trend.
it is understandable why some advocate there is a great success of advertisements at persuading us to buy goods. First, it is convenient and time-savings for people who want to find out what they exactly need due to the ubiquity of advertising. As markets become increasingly saturated and competition between players offering homogeneous products is more intense than ever before, customers have many choices to buy what they think is beneficial. Second, a person who is routinely exposed to promotions will get the constant urge to purchase the item advertised though there is no real need for him. However, this tendency could lead to excessive consumerism, which is a precursor of a throw-away society.
On the other hand, the incessant promotional campaigns may be run-of-the-mill that we are indifferent to it. Nowadays, advertisements permeate virtually everything we watch, read or listen to: Youtube videos are intermittently interrupted by promotions, TV shows are frequently hijacked by commercial breaks and readers of newspapers and magazines have been decrying advertorial spreads taking a greater portion of print publications. this inadvertently causes nuisance, it just seems impossible to enjoy ad-free content in this day of age.
In conclusion, the growing popularity of advertisements has some irritations, I opine that it has incentivized many factories to ramp up production, resulting in numerous number of customers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, second, so, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64925373134 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43554403231 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69776119403 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3717195928 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.636363636 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226979601342 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0760759429663 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0755056381515 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118973188958 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576992447503 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.07 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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