In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
It is true that due to the proliferation of online news and e-book, there is an increasing number of people who would rather read online than those printed. While traditional newspapers and books are predicted to be no longer necessary, I believe its integral role can not be replaced completely.
It is undeniable that the digital version of newspapers and books bring numerous benefits to readers. First, most of the web-based newspapers and books don’t charge people, which encourage them to eschew printed papers in favor of online ones. Second, reading newspapers and books online is much speedier and more convenient. For example, a person would choose to read by Internet-connected devices from the comfort of his own home instead of going out to the newsstand to purchase one. Although advantages from digital reading sources are unequivocal, I would contend that paper materials are still valuable not only at the present but also in the future.
There are some indeed justifications as to why people are fond of printed paper despite the growing development of digital ones. one of the reasons is that some gravitate towards reading printed books and newspapers due to their poor vision or technological knowledge, for instance, the elderly. They might not know how to use modern equipment or unable to read clearly through a screen. Another rationale is far-reaching repercussions of book publication being dispensed with. A host of publishers and logging companies might have to downsize or go bust since conventional newspapers and books are on the wane.
In conclusion, in spite of the benefits of digital books and newspapers, I’m of the opinion that printed versions will never be expendable.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: One
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...d versions will never be expendable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in spite of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25270758123 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94576873963 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606498194946 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3745451935 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.923076923 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223116480322 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775080997722 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384047404524 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135180116392 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117304453888 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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