Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Due to the great development of the internet and globalization, some argue that there is an overwhelming number of options offered for people in this day and age. While this trend has some indeed drawbacks, I believe it pale in comparison with the benefits of variety selection.
it is undeniable that people these days are provided a host of choices in light of the internet advancements, along with globalization. The more choices you are offered, the more convenient life you have. In the past, when the presence of advertisements was not as common as now, individuals can only buy goods which are sold near them and have no chance to compare those items to homogeneous products in terms of price, quality, among others. Nowadays, as competition between players providing the same good is more intense than ever before thanks to the increasing popularity of the internet, there are different types of one item promoted with growing frequency. Therefore, customers can choose the best products they can afford after considering multidimensional angles.
On the other hand, plenty of selection causes a certain demerit - there is a confusion for consumers as to what to purchase when it comes to similar products, which didn’t happen in the past. Too many choices might make our lives become more complicated than it was. For example, a person can waste hours and hours on choosing his suitable suits for a party between two famous brands with the same color and same style, which costs a lot of his precious time and energy. this is probably a testament to the downside of numerous choices, however, it does not seem to outweigh its upside.
In conclusion, I agree that people are offered a host of choices in these times. Despite some disadvantages, I am of the opinion that countless choices bring a bunch of advantages to our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98064516129 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8320034947 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.1913293936 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.769230769 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221626715556 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075447262196 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546225231889 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127735634289 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319876636776 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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