Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, advertising is the vital source for companies to launch new products and convey their information to people. There are split opinions regarding advertisement. Some believes that it is highly effective in convincing us to purchase products. Whereas, another group of thinker support it is everywhere and normal, thus we do not give consideration to it anymore. However, both have their own arguments. Therefore, before commenting on my opinion, both the views would be discussed.
First of all, advertisement can act as a powerful device to hypnotize people into buying goods and services. This is because of the different tactics shows in the broadcast, such as showing the people having a good time after buying such product and people think that also if they buy that thing so they become happy. Moreover, it is repeated several times and soon brainwash people to finally go out and get the product. For instance, if a person is watching television or any social media and sees a certain food advertisement many times, that may start feeling person hungry at last.
Nevertheless, there is another point of view in which ignoring the advertisements makes it a normal thing. After watching the dozens of advertisements people see it is the daily routine and get tired. So they avoid it. Some of the people even turn off their Television to avoid advertisement because it is repetitive. Even though companies are adopting unique method to annoy people. For example, in YouTube, advertisement place at the beginning or in between the videos, hoping that the viewer would force to watch the advertisement. However, the reality is strange many people click “Skip Ad” and continue on.
In conclusion, advertisement is influence people to buy goods and services, or they can be unsuccessful in many ways. We commonly see them these days, but not all of them fulfill their purpose. Thus, advertisement is designed and presented in the correct way to result in the highly effectiveness.
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Message: Did you mean 'watching'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: watching
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1472392638 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95490337407 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592024539877 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2522188766 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.65 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319315847772 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0809925103245 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425433168364 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181350890245 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255118919395 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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