Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Having an opinion suppose that advertising is enormously well-known and make people purchasing many kinds of merchandise. Other people say it is a normal thing that we do not need to concern about. In my point, advertisements always have an incredibly massive influence on everyone around the world owning to marketing and making notable buying invitations.
It is obvious that in modern life, whether you have a desire to start to do business on your own and stuff such as promoting the product, selling, making public your enterprises, ..., you definitely have to use promotion because it has many advantages.
Firstly, depending on advertising, products which are made become more attractive and appealing to customers. Although you make a product having the best quality and the most reasonable price on the earth, people can not believe in things which they have never known before. So, at this time, advertising acts as a means to help guests knowing about products better. When they have full insight, maybe making a decision will occur in nearly prospective time.
Secondly, we can easily see that not only helping people know about your purposes, the promotion also makes your product become more and more appealing by introducing and using many types of bright color. On the one hand, it looks like writing something with a friendly and interesting attitude and say that your manufactured things are suitable for special guests and the time is limited so customers should buy as soon as possible.
In conclusion, In my view, it is an obligation with firms which want to compete on the market via stand out campaigns contain advertising. Whether you do no know how to market and the ways to attract your guests, your business will become failures
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05154639175 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70463832945 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615120274914 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0741923832 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192579874563 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749988566934 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550450980748 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106183328408 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636417249999 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.