Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Companies target potential purchasers with adverts with the goal of attracting them to purchase specific products. Some people, on the other hand, find commercials to be annoying and burning daylight. As a result, they no further attach importance to them. From my perspective, I consider that whether the consumers like it or not, their behaviors are dominated by commercials, even if they are unconcerned about it.
The omnipresence of advertising, on the one hand, causes consumers’ apparent nonchalance to the advertised products. People are aware that these are merely attempting to entice consumers, yet thousands of advertisements are broadcast on television, social media, newspapers, and magazines with the sole purpose of making money by deceiving people with disingenuous methods. Therefore, consumers maintain a habit of shutting down floating advertising anywhere such as Youtube or Google without glancing at them.
I, admittedly, express strong support to the unshaken role of advertising to shopping patterns. It is undeniable that advertising is the most primeval and effective kind of marketing still in use to date now that it is a straightforward and practical method of drawing the community back to a product. They supply all the information about the product that facilitates price and quality comparisons to make the best decision. Hence, customers’ selections are based on informative advertisements. Likewise, marketing professionals always boss around consumer behavior towards psychological games. Customers are beguiled by the colorful and appealing advertisements, especially for the cuisine. Research of elementary school children, for example, discovered that exposure to advertising influenced which foods they claimed to prefer along with labeling and signage on vending machines influencing what secondary school students purchased.
In conclusion, it is conspicuous that the goal of advertising is to persuade customers to spend money; whether this is irritating or beneficial, the purchaser is always in control.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, likewise, second, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81125827815 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30154369668 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658940397351 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0496589509 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129635127656 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.036860934507 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345792143519 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762808551206 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393010060747 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.06 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 123.0 78.4519038076 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.