Some people say that to be successful in sport it is more important to be physically strong. Others argue that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on the role of physical and mental strength in what lies at the core of one's success in sports. I believe that one is not necessarily more important than the other, as I will explain now.
Supporters of physical prowess point out that most sports require players to compete physically, for example in football or basketball games. this means that a striker in a soccer match is often required to ensure high levels of stamina throughout a match so that he can dribble past defenders, sprint towards his opponents' goal. finish and be ready to assist his fellow teammates when necessary. this can be seen in the way Sadio Mane and many other successful soccer players like cristiano ronaldo and Messi perform in their games, and it is estimated that the average distance that they run in a game is around 11 kilometers. without being physically prepared for such an arduous task, they might not have achieved their levels of success in their sport.
On the other hand, though, those who say that mental prowess, not physical one, plays the deciding role highlight the fact that one can hardly stick to his training schedule and succeed in the face of adversity, if he is not self-disciplined, or in other words, mentally strong. Exceptional sportsmen like cristiano ronaldo and Michael Phelps, who train vigorously every day, clearly illustrate this principle. it was reported that cristiano ronaldo, despite possessing many desirable innate physical attributes and abilities such as height and speed, has never missed a training session and he even trained all by himself on the night he won the UFA championship, one of the most coveted titles in football. Perhaps, without mental resilience, even those with sporting talents cannot thrive.
In conclusion, physical and mental capabilities are equally important when it comes to what fundamentally decides whether one is likely to achieve success in his sport.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12264150943 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69964661532 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0036168073 49.4020404114 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.75 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218889831487 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0797120254749 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534456555042 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139529541805 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452456725403 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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